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Three Little Words by ~Nameless-Unknown:iconNameless-Unknown:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open




give me back
the stolen smiles
But also send
The reason again
Although
It will make me cry
And I know
Exactly
Why already
You let a liar
RULE
It hurts
'Cause if I said
I love you
To your face now
I'd mean it
Every single letter
From the deepest
Darkest
Hardest
Bits of my heart
I wonder
If the three words
Ever
Meant anything
Anything
Real
To you
I would kiss
Everytime,
You told me,
Toldme<\b>
and perhaps
you lied
a
lot
or
Perhaps NOT
but now
Three words
I miss you
from the same
Part of me
All I want
Is you
to
say
comeback
because I
pretended
to be strong
Let me
Walk
Walk away
While
My heart
Tore
into
more
Shards
And I
Wished that
Each step
You might follow
Walking away hurt
But what hurt more
Is you let
is you made
is you allowed
me
that HURTS
more than
"I don't feel
WE
can do
this
anymore"
Eight drops
of
POISON
All I can say
is
those three little words
tell me
I know
YOU
said them
and
maybe
you meant them
but if
love means
so
little
to you
all i have
to say
IS
.......
WHY<\b>
©2006-2009 ~Nameless-Unknown
:iconnameless-unknown:

Author's Comments

Well, this is my rather rhythmless, totally heart felt poem, which is antiromantic, and kinda me saying, oh how pathetic, not sure who to though. Perhaps myself, or perhaps the reader, or perhaps, the boy who the poem was written about. Anyhowz, Happy randomness!

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~AmegarixAoi Feb 1, 2006, 1:45:27 PM
Very nice, i appreciate one and two-word lines, this brought tears to my eyes to read, I have been where you are :hug: Be careful with your HTML tags, use / instead of \ to close them off (as with your bold tags here). I am a sap for love poems or ones about lost love, keep up the good work =)

--
"'Thou shalt not kill.' Remember? What kinda church man are you anyway?"
:iconeternalfighter:
~EternalFighter Feb 2, 2006, 3:38:12 AM
this is so beautiful....i know this feelin and this is it. you are really good!

--
Love is like war, easy to begin, difficult to end.
:iconarashi-ookami-chi:
~Arashi-Ookami-chi Apr 11, 2006, 8:08:43 AM
i like it thats all can say

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"Darkness and Light are the only parts of the world, while i stand in the shadows and watch you frolick in the light i always wonder, when will you all join me?"-Tempest
:iconsleeping-elf:
~Sleeping-Elf Aug 13, 2006, 11:45:34 AM
It's great to get things out without worrying about the rhythm, and this piece proves that raw emotions are more effective than a perfectly executed piece. well done :)

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It doesn't hurt to be nice! :)
:iconnameless-unknown:
~Nameless-Unknown Aug 14, 2006, 10:56:52 AM
Thanks for the comment :D

--
The answer is chocolate, it's always chocolate, chocolate even cures tonsilitis.
:iconsleeping-elf:
~Sleeping-Elf Aug 15, 2006, 7:25:01 AM
You're welcome :)

--
It doesn't hurt to be nice! :)
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